The second introductory
Do you like eating at resturants? Ithink you will say yes. Many resturants attract people by suitable prices and good services so we like eating at it. Linda`s and Jose`s rest are good examples of these resturants. Although, there are some similarities between Linda`s and Jose`s rest,there are also many differences between them.
please reconsider your choice of words in the second sentence??? Try to rewrite it again clarifying your position in the thesis.
ردحذفleave a space between i and think
ردحذفthere is a comma befor so "fan boys"
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